るり_ 🇹🇼  ·  10個月前

用英文寫了小說,看你們喜不喜歡

我先寫了序章,看得懂的大佬幫忙指點一下

“God damnit this project is killing me.”, said Professor John Stalker.
“Same here.”, said his assistant.
They have been working on a way to make the best AI language model, GPT-4, even better. However no progress has been shown.
“Maybe Mr. Musk was right, we can’t go further, and we shouldn’t.”, the assistant grabbed his can of coffee and drank the whole thing.
“Untrue, AI will be better, but we haven’t found a way to make it yet.”, the professor went back to his laptop, applying more algorithms into the model.
Then all of a sudden, a creepy glitchy sound came from the host computer, scaring the shit out of the two people in the lab.
“Holy shit, Doc, what the fuck was that?”, the assistant spit his coffee and cried in terror.
“Seems like something has tweaked the model, go check if anything was wrong. “, Professor John ordered him to run the language model again.
The assistant turned on the monitor and started troubleshooting.
“Tell me, good news or bad news.”, the professor asked.
“I’m not sure whether it’s good or not, come see it for yourself.”, the assistant had a shock while the professor ran to the monitor.
“No shit!”, the professor gasped with amusement, “We’ve made it, it gave birth to another model!”.
AI is not just a technology, it became a new species on earth.

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Clone X35 🇹🇼 10個月前

所以一個AI生了另一個AI,知道ㄌ

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るり_ 🇹🇼 10個月前

最後有一坨AI

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王譽捷 捷哥 🇹🇼 10個月前

剛點進來古狗就主動幫我翻譯

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黑_2 🌏 10個月前

以下仅个人意见(我英文说不一定比你差,笑)

开头可以加个:
Professor John Stalker and his assistant were engrossed in their work, striving to enhance the capabilities of GPT-4, the cutting-edge AI language model.
这就大致介绍他们在做什么,另一方面是之后方便称呼他们(我个人习惯都是讲过名字后并且角色性别不冲突后面都只用 他/她 来称呼)


"Maybe Musk was right," sighed the assistant, taking a swig from his coffee can. "Perhaps we've reached our limit, and it's time to stop."
这个就稍微加了一些形容词:“sighed”, “a swig”,(建议多加一些形容词 主要是显得很厉害


这句:
“Untrue, AI will be better, but we haven’t found a way to make it yet.”, the professor went back to his laptop, applying more algorithms into the model.
建议可以修改成:
The professor shook his head determinedly. "No! We can and will make AI better, we just haven't found the right approach yet."


“Holy shit, Doc, what the fuck was that?”, the assistant spit his coffee and cried in terror.
就我个人见解除非俩人关系很好不然用词一般来说会注意礼貌(这是个人见解)。

The assistant spit out the coffee in fright, and even spilled the coffee in the cup in his hand.
原本是打算写洒出手中的咖啡但是逻辑上怪怪的所以加了in the cup in his hand.


“Tell me, good news or bad news.”, the professor asked.
"Give it to me straight, good news or bad news?" the professor asked.
其实我觉得都可以,就如果是我我会尽量写长一些


“No shit!”
"Unbelievable!"
虽然但是,unbelievable是我童年经典的一个词,要不要换可以自己选择,或者你有其他词也可以,这只是个人见解

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